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Entry: Something.. May 25, 2009

Something in my chest,
has been put to rest

Something in my breath,
goes out and comes in relaxed

Something in my gaze
has lost its haze

Something in my thoughts
is no more lost

Something in my dreams
now lets me comfortably sleep

Something in my days,
has stopped useless chase

Something in my face
now shows love's grace

Something in my smile
is gentle and light

Something in my eyes,
dances like fireflies

Something in my laughter
has sought,what it was after

Something in me,
feels absolute free

Something in everything
reminds me of you -My wings

16 comments


	BlameOliver! July 18, 2009 03:06 PM PDT This is one nice piece of poetry that i read. Thanx for putiing it up.


	BlameOliver! June 17, 2009 09:08 PM PDT @Deeksha Copy Cat.


	Deeksha June 16, 2009 03:14 PM PDT BlameOliver! huhhhh


	BlameOliver! June 8, 2009 05:42 PM PDT @varun no need to trade bro. lets be puff buddies. BTW its BlameOliver! can't take chances with that. @Deeksha Whatever huhhh.


	Deeksha June 8, 2009 10:18 AM PDT Wow! Of all the possibilities on earth, I could have never imagined my blog could be used for "these" purposes.I just hope am not listed in Google for the wrong reasons. @Varun and Sandy - Thanks :)


	Sandy June 7, 2009 12:20 AM PDT something well and simply written...


	varun June 6, 2009 02:05 PM PDT people who want to trade in any contraband can always contact me.. @blameoliver about the poem... its good, simply well written.. looks like the fighter in you is lasting.. :)


	Deeksha June 3, 2009 11:12 AM PDT I want some ;)...and if anything goes wrong,I 'll Blame Oliver :P


	BlameOliver! June 1, 2009 08:14 PM PDT Well Leave me for a while. I could never be an interesting discussion no matter how very thoughtful [ :) ] my comments are. The question is still hanging as it was what about the reefer i have in stock. Should i consume it all by myself ? or you really want some.


	Deeksha June 1, 2009 10:30 AM PDT @Anuj Thanks bhai :) @BlameOliver! Thanks,for sharing the wisdom,I didnt know "This" was my inspiration.Silence - yes, it must be hangover,if there is something of this kind ;)...And now , I know what makes you write so thoughtful comments.


	BlameOliver! May 30, 2009 09:14 PM PDT Your Silence is it the acceptance. I have some real good reefer stuff with me. I need not say anymore.


	Anuj May 27, 2009 10:40 AM PDT something in u always mesmerize me my sweetu :) my didi is so cute n bhiaya is so buddhu :) nice poem didi...


	BlameOliver! May 26, 2009 08:03 PM PDT Have you been smoking joint off late :) With suspicion of you becoming a cannabies junkie.


	Deeksha May 26, 2009 11:46 AM PDT @Vid Thanks sweetheart:) @Mickey Mouse Thanks :) Who are you?


	Mickey Mouse May 26, 2009 10:33 AM PDT Something in this poem tells me, how are you. Something in this poem tells me,what I need to know, Beautiful :)..I mean the lines you wrote :)


	vid May 26, 2009 09:22 AM PDT this poem is something gud...... :)

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